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    A couple poems.

    Amber_Anya
    Amber_Anya


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    A couple poems. Empty A couple poems.

    Post by Amber_Anya Mon Oct 25, 2010 10:39 pm

    Here's two poems that I wrote tonight. Let me know what you think. Neither have titles. =)


    I open my mouth
    To let my soul out
    I sing from my gut
    And you feel my voice
    Pouring down like a golden cloud
    Stretching forth to reach you
    Can you hear me?
    Can you hear my heart pulsing out the beat?
    Can you feel my words envelope your body?
    Encasing you in a golden down of sound
    Invigorating you down to your bones
    So real and alive, you can touch the ebb and flow
    I give you my mind, I give you my heart
    My song, my love
    Might tear you apart
    It may break open your shell
    Tear out your core
    You’ll float alongside me
    And we’ll get twined together
    Lost in the music


    Here's the next one:

    A lucky chance drew you to me
    We talk all the time, so casually
    Sharing our past, revealing our sins
    I thought we connected, why won’t you let me in?

    Tell me what you feel, show me you care
    Why do you turn away when I can’t help but stare?
    You like me I can feel it, you’ve confessed before,
    I’m so drawn to you; your presence shakes me down to the core

    You say you’re not happy and you want to go home,
    But all I hear is that you’re leaving me alone
    I don’t know what to do, are you running away?
    And if that’s the case, why aren’t I enough to make you stay?[/

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